It was Christmas eve and I looked outside and the snow looked as soft as a feather, I was happy with my owner jumping up and down on the bed. Until her mum came in and told her
‘‘get to bed’’. She looked out the window and her husband was building a trampoline. He cut himself with the pole to help the trampoline stand up, he started to move it, it looked like he needed some help but he got it. He went inside and then some foxes came on the trampoline and looked at each other and said ‘‘Should we start jumping? Maybe we can touch the moon’’ then they started to jump. It looked like they are having fun and then there is me in the house sad. Then a badger came on the trampoline the foxes started to look and the badger and then started jumping the badger said ‘‘Can I come and jump with you guys we could touch the moon’’ they started jumping more fun than ever. I was steering at the animals, I was jealous because they are on the trampoline and I'm inside. Then a hedgehog and a squirrel were on the trampoline, I was sad. It was Christmas morning my owner got out of bed and ran down the stairs. She went in the lounge and her dad opened the door, my owner started to run to the trampoline and then I ran to the trampoline like I was the flash, I started jump up and down like I was crazy. She looked at me like I was insane, but I didn't care because I was having so much fun, she looked disappointed in me.
Good job Josef I like your story but try to add paragraphs and do your speech marks right Anyway good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks I will add paragraphs next time and speech marks right thanks
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