My Inquiry facts

                                             This Is my Inquiry Facts About Rhinos I have been working on this for a wile but I am don't with it and now you can see what I been working on this.

My Learning Goals Master 2016

                                           This Is My Learning Goals  for 2016.  I had my Parent Interview last night and I told them about my evidence with my Nana and Grandad with my video Reading and Math and how a move up a stage for Math to stage 5 part 1 to stage 6 part 1. I show my Nana and Grandad my Mid year reflection and what I am p of.

Worst Lunch Ever

Worst Lunch Ever

One lovely day us lions were sleeping in the hot sun until some buffalo's came to annoy us so, we decided to attack them. Then we thought we could eat this baby calf for LUNCH. So we crept along the river bank and pounced on the herd of buffalo sending them into a frenzy like they were a scaredy cat with a dog. We dragged the baby calf in the water.

When we got the baby calf out of the water he was soaking wet.  We had a visitor for lunch, his name was Mr Crocodile and he got very greedy with lunch, so we played tug of war and the one that wins gets lunch. Luckily we got to have lunch today unlike the big fat greedy crocodile.

But then a herd of buffalos came to get their baby calf back from us. BAM! I got hit in the ear by one of the buffalo and the calf was gone. I wondered why one of the buffaloes hit me in the ear like a butterfly.

Luckily we got away but we were so HUNGRY. We got chased away by the big buffaloes. It was the most scary bit in my whole life. Us lions got back safely but hurt really bad, but we will get that baby calf one day, well, we will all try.

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Worst Lunch Ever!

One lovely day us lions were sleeping in the hot sun until some buffalo's came to annoy us. Then we thought we could eat this baby calf for LUNCH. So  we crept along the river bank and pounced on the herd of buffalo sending them into a frenzy like they were a scaredy cat with a dog. We dragged the baby calf in the water when we got the baby calf out it was soaking wet.  We had a visitor for lunch his name is crocodile he got very greedy with lunch, so we play’d tug of war the one that win’s get lunch. Luckily we got to have lunch today unlike the big fat greedy crocodile. But then a herd of buffalo’s came to get there baby calf from us. BAM I got hit in the ear by one of the buffalo and the calf was gone I wonder why one of the buffaloes hit me in the ear. Luckily we got a away but we were so HUNGRY. We got chased away by the big buffaloes it was the most scary bit in my hole life. Us lions got back safely but hurt really bad, but we will get that baby calf one day.