W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

Title

Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?

Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).

Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

Second Draft

The red is what i did new to the other first draft

Worst Lunch Ever!

One lovely day us lions were sleeping in the hot sun until some buffalo's came to annoy us. Then we thought we could eat this baby calf for LUNCH. So  we crept along the river bank and pounced on the herd of buffalo sending them into a frenzy like they were a scaredy cat with a dog. We dragged the baby calf in the water when we got the baby calf out it was soaking wet.  We had a visitor for lunch his name is crocodile he got very greedy with lunch, so we play’d tug of war the one that win’s get lunch. Luckily we got to have lunch today unlike the big fat greedy crocodile. But then a herd of buffalo’s came to get there baby calf from us. BAM I got hit in the ear by one of the buffalo and the calf was gone I wonder why one of the buffaloes hit me in the ear. Luckily we got a away but we were so HUNGRY. We got chased away by the big buffaloes it was the most scary bit in my hole life. Us lions got back safely but hurt really bad, but we will get that baby calf one day.