Hello guys and welcome to my other blog post about The Cloud, here is the link for the video you can watch http://www.literacyshed.com/partly-cloudy.html
We had to wright about the setting of the video
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The sky as blue as the sea, the clouds were as white as cotton candy.
I went to my cloud and he gave me a baby, he was crying until he gave him a football and some football gear, I soke my head meaning no he took it off because the people that get the baby won't like it.
I took it anyways and gave it to the owner was so happy that she got her baby girl, I went back to a cloud that was lonely and he gave me a crocodile, for a second a thought he was crazy but then he was serious, the crocodile jump and my head was in his mouth, he put in a bag and then I flew of away with it. I put the crocodile in the lake.
I came back and he was making a baby goat when he made it the goat just ran right into me , then he pack it up in the bag, I went away and put it in a farm so they can take care of them, I came back and he came out with a cloud that looked like a sheep, then it turn into a hedgehog I started to scream like I was just born because the spikes were right in my hand. I chuck it up into the air, then it landed into my hand again, the cloud put it into the bag but you could still could still see spikes because the spikes were coming out of the bag. I put the hedgehog in the garden.
I came back with spikes in my head, he took them out and my feathers came out with it then he put the feathers back, he turn around and pulled out a shark. Then I looked up at the other clouds and they were having fun with the baby chicks, then he offered me the shark then I flew away to another cloud, I looked back and I saw him angry, I felt sorry for him but I need to get amour if I am taking that shark. I took the bag that he gave and then look back at the cloud and was crying hard out, I came back with a bag and open it and it was football gear, he hug me and let me go because he was so happy, I ask for something then he made me a eel, the eel electric me but I can hold the pain in until I deliver it to the lake.
I didn’t tell the cloud my name.
My name is Peck nice to meet you, I am a stork and I am here to deliver stuff that you give me.
Hi Josef your story was very entertaining and funny but it didn't make very much sense so next time you can work on making it make sense. Anyway great story bye!!
ReplyDeleteHey Nature thanks for you comment next time I will make sure that I make it make sense.
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