W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present. I hope you enjoy my story.
It was Sunday morning I was playing my Xbox 360. Then my mum came in with a box I saw her and wonder if it was a Xbox one. Mum put it on the table and then Ir Open the box. So I open the box and a dog jump out I put it up and then I saw 1 leg missing so I drop it on the ground and then the dog saw a red ball and tried to get the red ball and it ran into the door and then got under the desk and got the red ball and gave it to me. I kick the ball into the box and the dog went into the box and the box tip on him then i giggle a little bit and then played with the dog so the dog and I went outside to play with the ball with my dog but befor I went outside I said to mum ‘Mum i'm going outside. I got the bull and I made the dog chase the bull then he fell over with the bull and he keep on doing it for 10 minutes. Started to laugh so hard that my face got really red
Now I know to nether judge someone how they look
The end
WOW!!!! Josef, good job. I really like your blog post. What I liked about your post is that you have put really good detail in your work. But what you have to do is talk more about the dog. But still you have done a really good blog post.
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