Worst lunch ever (FIRST DRAFT)

Term 2 Week 3

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

Title

Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?

Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).

Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

worst lunch ever

One lovely day us lions we were sleeping in the hot sun until some buffalo's came to anore us. Then we thought we could eat this baby calf for LUNCH. So  we crept along the river bank and pounced on the herd of buffalo sending them into a frenzy. We drang the baby calf in the water.  We had a visitor for lunch  he got very greedy with lunch so we play’d tug of war the one that win’s get lunch. Luckily  we got to have lunch. But then another herd of buffalo’s came to get there baby calf. BAM I got hit in the ear by one of the buffalo and the calf was gone. Luckily we got a away but we were so HUNGRY.